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06 June 2008 @ 10:42 am
Eyeball Request  
Okay, so I have about 2300 hundred words on part two of 'Practical Applications' done. I'm at a scene break. I have been tweaking and fiddling with it for two days, and I've made Nin look at it so many times, she needs new eyeballs too [g] Anyone who is familiar with Iron Man/Tony Stark be willing to just give it a quick read through and to see if Tony's voice sounds right and if the story more or less holds together? Otherwise, I'll keep tinkering and tweaking to no good effect and never get this story finished.
 
 
 
kensiegkensieg on June 6th, 2008 05:54 pm (UTC)
pick me! pick me!I'll send it back asap after a quick eyeball.
Ithithildyn on June 6th, 2008 05:56 pm (UTC)
ROTFL! Okay, I pick you :)
kensiegkensieg on June 6th, 2008 05:58 pm (UTC)
you remember my email address? I treated you a dabble of me 30 years ago.
Ithithildyn on June 6th, 2008 05:59 pm (UTC)
What was 30 years ago?

Actually, I posted it to a filtered post that only you and Dejla can see: http://ithildyn.livejournal.com/649098.html

:)
kensiegkensieg on June 6th, 2008 06:08 pm (UTC)
30 years ago I was 16. I was clueless and an absolute dork.

I'm reading it now. Actually I printed it out and reading it with a pen in hand.

Comments to follow soon.