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17 April 2007 @ 09:33 pm
DVD Commentary: Takasago's Pines - Part Two  
Here's part two of the DVD commentary for Takasago's Pines. Even more wordy than the first part!

Follow me below the cut for my scintillating commentary!



I’d meant to add something to the end of the first part, and got ahead of myself in my sleepiness last night. So I’ll add it here at the beginning of this part. Triona’s relationship with LaCroix and Methos. I didn’t set out to write a polyamorous relationship. It just sort of evolved. And it came into being long before I read the Anita Blake books! One of LaCroix’s perennial reminders to all his ‘children’ is that they’re no longer human, that human/mortal conventions don’t apply. Methos has been brought into a vampire family unit in this relationship. And it’s something he struggles with in these early years. It’s something Triona struggles with. But ultimately, her POV is a vampire one, even though she’s not fully a vampire.

For LaCroix, Methos being a part of what they are adds another layer to their lives together. FK vampires don’t just feed on blood, they feed on the emotions of those whose blood they take. Triona being with Methos adds complexity and depth to LaCroix’s Master bond with Triona. And as time goes on, Methos realizes that it isn’t a one way street.


If I should live long,
Then perhaps the present days
May be dear to me,
Just as past time filled with grief
Comes quietly back in thought.

~ Fujiwara no Kiyosuke



I’m not sure if the poem is Triona’s, or Methos’. I think it might belong to them both
~~~~~~~~~~~

Paris, France, present day

Part Two

Triona let Methos’ kisses, the feel of his hands, wake her completely. She had puttered around the apartment for some time, catching up on work, reading, and then had let a wave of sleep take her in its gentle embrace. It had been so long since she’d truly slept well, but being here, amongst his things, the lingering scent of him reassuring in its familiarity, here she fell into a peaceful and dreamless sleep.

Scent comes up a lot in these stories. I think it’s a carry over from Forever Knight about ‘blood scent’ that everyone has a distinct scent to a vampire. I also wanted to convey the stress and fear she’s been under all these months. That finally, being surrounded by his scent, in his bed, she could sleep peacfully.

“Did you have a nice nap?” his voice was a soft rasp that made her catch her breath.

“Lovely. But waking up was so much better.”

He lay along side her on his bed, his hip cupped against the bend of her waist, his hand brushing up across her ribs, over her breast, the tips of his fingers settling against her throat. She shifted slightly; her body molding closer into his, reveling in the warmth that he always seemed to radiate, like a cat in the sun. Patience, love, and time, she whispered silently to herself. It was a start. She felt more hopeful than she had allowed herself to be for months. They lay like that, content for just touch and the beat of their hearts together in the silence. No matter what troubles lay between them, in moments like these, she was genuinely happy to just be with him. It had been like that from the beginning, when she’d spent far too many years not recalling what simple joy was. Something not really remembered till that first morning they’d spent together, a first morning she’d thought would be their last. Gentle, sweet, and caring Adam Pierson had changed her life in a handful of hours; Methos had changed her entire universe with a few hours more.

I swear to god at this point in the story, I truly believed things would end on a happy note. Triona is feeling hope, and she’s happy just being with him. When Methos came into her life, it was a window opening. And despite everything, that’s what she holds on to through the darkness.

“I think there’s strawberry jam in the fridge,” he whispered teasingly in her ear.

Giggling, she wrapped her arms around him, not entirely surprised his thoughts had been on that same morning as hers had been. “Maybe one day I’ll let you coat me with jam, but not today!”

“Promise?”

“More the fool me, but yes, I promise!”

“You should have let me do it then, you know.” She could feel his smile against her cheek.

“So you keep telling me.”

“Only because I’m right.”

Back when Methos was introduced to our stories, Margie was the one who wrote that particular fic, but is was never posted publicly. Triona and Methos were having breakfast in bed, and a splat of jam fell and Methos was quite keen to licking even more of it off. So that’s why you see jam references in some of these. And, total side note… the reason we wrote Methos in? Everyone we knew was at a con where Peter was a guest (the con the PWFC was created at actually) and so we wrote Methos fic to cheer ourselves up!

“I didn’t realize at the time you had a strawberry jam fetish!” she protested. Holding him tighter, she sighed, not realizing she had till he began to stroke her arm.

“I know it’s been difficult… I’ve been difficult. And I know this hasn’t been easy for you.”

“You don’t need to justify yourself to me, Methos. I understand. But I just can’t go on as we have been. Not anymore.”

She can’t go on being an afterthought in his life. Or at least, that's how she views their relationship. It’s always been on his terms, and she’s always gone along with that – till now. She’s been almost like a mistress to his life as Adam Pierson. He leaves, then comes back into her life for a time, only to leave again.

“I won’t try and make you continue with the agreement Mac and I had. You were right, you didn’t agree to it, and it’s not fair to you. If he won’t accept that, then we’ll make other arrangements, even if I have to complete your training myself. We’ll work something out.”

She shook her head. “We won’t have to. You and Amanda need to have a little faith!” she exclaimed. “Duncan made a commitment to me, to be my teacher. You don’t think he takes that seriously? No matter that the two of you have issues, in the end, he will feel honour bound to finish what he’s begun. And he will.” She pulled away, sitting up. “He may grumble and glower, but in the end, he’ll do as he promised.”

Methos looked up at her skeptically, toying with a strand of her hair. “That easy?”

“Yes.” When it seemed as if he was going to argue with her, she shushed him. “I don’t want to talk about Duncan anymore.”

She sees Duncan much more clearly than the old folks do [g] In many ways, she and Duncan are a great deal alike. Though I think she’s more cynical than he is. And she knows very well his commitment to her, and the one he made to Methos to teach her, will be paramount when all is said and done.

“Fine,” he agreed, a smile tugging at his lips. “Your wish is my command. It is!” he protested at her indelicate snort. “So how was your day, darling?” he asked, merriment in his eyes.

Rolling her eyes, she played along. “Oh, the usual. Went and got my hair done, picked up the dry cleaning, had a tryst with the milkman.” This time Methos snorted. “Okay, so I didn’t pick up the dry cleaning!”

“Brat!”

“Your point?” She brushed her hand through his hair. “Actually, I got some work done. Moved around a few of your investments, made you enough money so you can take me on that trip to Paris you always promised.” Grinning, she kissed the tip of his nose. “Oh, that’s right, we’re in Paris. Never mind.”

Still thinking this is going to end well! What a fool I am [g] Okay, so when they’re not tearing each other to shreds, I love the light heartedness that they have, the banter, the obvious affection. When they work, they really do work well.

Gently pulling her back down to lay next to him, he said, “This wasn’t exactly what I had in mind when I said we’d travel one day, I hope you know that, love.”

“Yeah well, I’ve learned that nothing ever goes as planned. Maybe one day we can go somewhere, just the two of us.”

They don’t have anything near a normal life. I think that’s been one of the things wearing at their relationship. And it’s this experience, in the future, that makes them both realize that they need to take the time and make the effort to be a unit, a couple.

“I’d like that.” Suddenly, he got up off the bed. “But till then…” Smiling mysteriously, he went over to a small wooden chest chased with silver filigree at the far end of the room, opening it and removing an indigo blue glass bottle. Coming back to the bed, he sat on the edge and instructed her to close her eyes.

“Why?” she asked, sitting up on her elbows, mystified by his request.

“Because,” was his one word reply. He pushed her back down onto the bed. “No peeking!”

Deciding there was no harm in humouring him, she did as he asked and lay back on the pillows, shutting her eyes and listening to the small noises he made as he did whatever it was he was doing. She felt the sensation of air brushing past her face, followed by a scent that was intoxicating, like a summer garden at the end of a long hot day.

“Tell me what you smell,” he commanded softly, his voice not much more than a whisper.

Yes, more scents!

Not immediately answering, she first took a few gentle breaths, inhaling the scent that now seemed to permeate the air around her. She sighed a little, reminded of what it had been like to stand in the warmth of the sun, summertime walks, and autumn picnics; days that were now far behind her. Finally she replied, with a note of wistfulness in her voice, “The end of a long summer day, Japanese oranges at Christmas, the sandalwood writing chest you keep on your desk, the waft of incense in an old church.”

Scents can remind us of all sorts of things. I liked the idea of some of the notes in the perfume reminding her of things she’d never experience again

Then his lips were brushing hers and she shivered a little at that warm touch. He drew away, and then there was a sensation of coolness, glass brushing against the inside of her wrist, liquid spreading slowly, his fingers gently working scented oil into delicate skin. Then the process was repeated on the other wrist, his fingers trailing like feathers up the inside of her arm, lingering with a gentle swirl that made her heart skip a beat. She tried to speak, but he made a shhh sound, this time pressing his lips against her closed eyes. Now, drops were falling at the hollow of her throat, a slow trickle carrying the scented liquid down between her breasts. Triona sighed softly as once more his fingers delicately began their work, warmth seeming to spread from his hands, over her skin and through her body. Fingers skimmed just over the swell of her breast, and her sigh became a sound of frustration as the touch withdrew. It took all her willpower to lay there, still and silent, when what she wanted more than anything was to pull him to her and drown herself in his body.

Yeah, if this were only a rated R fic! Imagine what might have happened. And still, things seem to be going so well. I mean, what could be wrong? Methos, bed, scented oil being massaged into skin. They’re slackers, what can I say?

The fingers stopped. “Patience is a virtue,” he said, laughter in his voice.

This time she opened her eyes. “Conceited old man,” she murmured huskily. Taking a deep breath, she let the scent of summer and tangerines hold her in its intoxicating fantasy for just a little longer. “Wherever that was, I’m glad I got to visit.” Caressing the side of his face, her thumb skimmed across his lips.

Taking the hand in his, he started once more to massage her wrist, moving up to gently knead the palm of her hand. “There’s a place, on the shores of the Mediterranean, with orange and lemon groves. I’ve had a home of one kind or another there for a very long time. In the summer, at the end of a long hot day, at twilight, the air is heavy with the scent of the fruit and the heat of the day. No matter how many centuries pass, its perfume is the same each and every summer. I’d hoped that this would take you there with me, even if only in memory, until we can go together one day.”

I think Methos would have such a place. Or at least, I like to think so.

“I can almost see it.” Pushing herself up, she shifted to lie against his chest as he put his arms around her. “Where did you get it from? The perfume, I mean,” she asked curiously.

“Get it? Why, I made it especially for you.” He tapped her nose teasingly with the tip of a finger.

“You are full of surprising talents, aren’t you?”

“Well, I don’t like to boast or anything…”

Triona snickered. “Oh no, you’re the epitome of modest.”

Mr. Modest!

“I like to think so,” he agreed smugly. “Actually, the skill went along with being a doctor in times past; mixing elixirs and unguents, physics and tinctures. This one in particular I originally created for Catherine of Aragon.”

“Henry the Eighth’s first wife? That Catherine of Aragon?”

“Mmm-hmm, Catalina de Aragón, Princess of Spain, Princess of Wales, Queen Consort of England. I was court apothecary early in the reign of Henry, and visited his young queen often. During one visit, she told me how she missed the warm summers of her home in Spain, the scent of orange groves heavy in the night air. So I blended this for her, to remind a homesick young woman of those childhood summers.”

“What was she like?”

Methos chuckled. “Stubborn. She would never bow to the inevitable, still loved Henry till the day she died no matter the humiliation he’d heaped upon her. She was a queen.”

A chill settled over her, one that even the warmth of his body couldn’t dissipate. “Love destroys everything,” she whispered. She felt him go still against her, and she regretted the words; hadn’t even realized she’d said them aloud till the sound had passed her lips.

And it all goes to hell. It wasn’t my fault, I swear!!

“If I thought you really meant that, I’d be concerned,” was all he said.

Shaking her head, she turned in his arms, sitting back on her knees. “I’m sorry, Methos, I didn’t mean it the way it sounded.”

“Didn’t you?”

“No!” Closing her eyes, she hung her head. “Maybe I did, or part of me did.”

His hands to either side of her face drew her head up. “Triona, don’t hide from me.” It was a command and a plea. She opened her eyes. “You told me this morning you trusted me. Then show me. Tell me what is it you fear.”

She couldn’t speak, just stared into his eyes, unable to look away. Shaking her head mutely, a tear rolled down her face. Taking a deep shuddering breath, she exhaled a single word… “Loss.” Her hands were shaking, and Methos took them in his, stilling the trembling. “You’re always walking out of my life, Methos. And one day, I know you’ll walk away and you won’t come back. God knows I’ve given you enough reason to over and over again. I thought that time had finally come.”

And now it all comes out. They can’t avoid this any longer.

He searched her eyes. “That’s what you expected when you came here this morning, wasn’t it? You came here expecting the end.”

She didn’t deny his words. “I couldn’t admit it to myself, not really. I just knew I had to see you, to see your eyes, so I’d know. I realize now that I’ve been preparing myself all these months – since before we left Toronto and every day that we we’ve been in Paris with not a word from you, for you to vanish completely from my life.”

“I’m sorry.” He wasn’t looking at her anymore and it was as if he’d physically withdrawn. The feeling of loss came so abruptly to her that it was like a blow. The warmth and joy that had enveloped them was suddenly gone, as if it had all been a dream, and she shivered in the cold.

And he shuts down, throws up his walls again, and shuts her out.

“For what? Meeting me? Staying? Or for coming back?” Bitter tears pressed against the back of her eyelids, and a part of her couldn’t believe she’d said the words. But she’d wanted to say them for years. She knew that.

He stiffened, and she felt a pang of guilt. Covering her face with her hands, she drew in upon herself. As she started to speak, he cut her off. “Don’t! Don’t try and apologize for saying what you believe!”

“Then tell me I’m wrong, Methos!” she cried. “Tell me you don’t look at me and regret ever becoming entangled in my life!” She grabbed his hands. “Tell me that you don’t wish I wasn’t simply a mortal woman. A woman who would grow old and die so you could just move on!”

Now we’re getting down to the heart of the matter. All she wants is for him to tell her she’s wrong, that he needs her and wants her in his life. But he isn’t going to do that.

Pulling away from her, he didn’t speak, getting off the bed to pace the room like a caged animal. The cold shuttered expression that she hated was back. She didn’t know if he was angry because of her words, or because she was right. Finally he said, “Despite what you seem to believe, I don’t regret having you in my life. But I won’t lie to you, Triona. I wish things were different; that both of us had made other choices. But might have beens can’t be.” He didn’t sound angry, but he did sound like a tired and beaten man.

“You haven’t really forgiven me, have you?” It wasn’t a surprise, not really. Methos would always see her choice to be brought across as a betrayal, no matter how he denied it. He never really understood the depths of her desperation when she’d asked LaCroix to bring her across that night last year. It had only ever been about escape from the torture her life had become as the mortal companion of a vampire; a situation she had no longer been able to bear. Of course, the result hadn’t been freedom, but a cruel twist of fate that had trapped her eternally in twilight.

He doesn’t understand how desperate she was, and he can’t quite forgive her for not telling him what she planned. And it keeps coming back to that, and will for some time to come. And it will all explode spectacularly when Triona brings Joe across because of a wrong choice.

“This isn’t about forgiveness, or blame.”

“Then what? What is it about, Methos?”

“Why are you doing this now?” he demanded. “Does it really matter? What’s done is done!”

“Don’t you see? All you care about right now is that Duncan accepts you for who you are. Well what about me? How do you think it makes me feel when I know you don’t accept me, Methos?” She looked at him pleadingly. “I can’t change what I am. God knows I wish I could, but I can’t. You share my bed, but you won’t share my life, and that isn’t enough anymore. I can’t keep paying for the choice I made. Don’t you think my fate is punishment enough?”

When it comes down to it, it’s all about acceptance. Not such an easy thing sometimes

“I can’t do this now, Triona!” He stared out the window, his profile in sharp relief against the dim light of the late afternoon sun.

“That’s the problem, Methos.” She shook her head, coming to stand behind him. “It’s never the right time. There’s always some reason, some interruption, some excuse.”

“It’s not intentional.”

“Isn’t it? Maybe not consciously, but we both do it. Dance around our problems, avoiding them, thinking if we don’t look at them, they’ll go away.”

Shoving his hands in his pockets, he half turned, looking at her. “But they don’t.”

Shaking her head sadly, she placed a tentative hand on his arm. “Can’t we start again? Please? I hate fighting, I hate being apart. I want to wake up tomorrow morning with you next to me.”

“I know you do.” Sighing, he brushed her face with his fingertips.

She took his hand in hers, pressing it against her cheek. “Come with me, Methos. Let’s go somewhere, I don’t care where, just away from here. Just this once, choose me first. Please.”

“Triona…” He shook his head, turning away. His expression spoke volumes.

It isn’t much to ask, you wouldn’t think. But he just can’t, not now, and now she thinks he never will. And then there’s the chasm between them, their ages, their lives. I think the reality of that is something that hit them both over this interval. Just because you know something, doesn’t mean you always ‘feel’ it.

“No,” this was whispered. “Never mind.” She would never be first. “I’m going to go home now.” Her voice cracked

“Maybe that would be best.” His voice was flat, giving no inkling to what he was feeling.

A part of her died at his words. “Yes, of course it would be.”

He touched her shoulder. “Just until this is all settled. There are just things I need to deal with first. Please try and understand.”

“Don’t I always?” She choked back the bitterness. “You know where to find me.”

He just nodded as she walked away, snagging her coat from the chair. She stopped, hand on the doorknob, fighting the urge to plead, to beg. Taking hold of herself, she pulled the door open. Then she heard his voice soft behind her. “I need you in my life, Triona, even if you don’t believe that now.”

Taking a deep shuddering breath, she grasped the doorknob, steadying herself. She didn’t look back as she strode away.

I really feel for both of them at the end of this story. They both have so much hurt to work through, and they both need to come to an acceptance of the choices they’ve made. So of course, I had to at least try and fix things a bit by writing a postscript to this, “My Soul Is Dark”. But that’s another story!

And I think the last poem speaks volumes.

Thanks for making it to the end! It’s all Kate’s fault!



~~~~~~~~~~~~

My black hair tangled
As my own tangled thoughts,
I lie here alone,
Dreaming of one who has gone,
Who stroked my hair till it shone.

When I think of you,
Fireflies in the marsh rise
Like the soul's jewels,
Lost to eternal longing,
Abandoning my body.

~ Izumi Shikibu



 
 
 
dejladejla on April 18th, 2007 07:43 pm (UTC)
Very interesting!
Ith: Art - Wildwoodithildyn on April 18th, 2007 08:15 pm (UTC)
Thanks :) I couldn't believe when I got to the end how wordy I'd been. Dang.
She went that-a-way...: amused methosjinxed_wood on June 1st, 2007 03:14 pm (UTC)
And here I am - finally! I think the thing that struck me most about the commentary was how you were certain this story was going to have a happy ending right up to the moment the it didn't This happens to me all the bloody time!

And, on a story note, the image of Amanda, behind Methos's back, miming choking herself to Triona, was coffee-splurt worthy!

Your thoughts on Duncan were interesting, and not what I was expecting. Frankly, I thought they'd be a lot harsher, so they came as a surprise.

But the real question....what happened to the Strawberry Jam story ?
Ithithildyn on June 1st, 2007 04:49 pm (UTC)
Yeah, they have minds of their own. And in the sequel, they're even more unhappy. I have some ideas for the third bit, but goodness knows when I'll get around to writing it!

I liked the Amanda bit too. I don't get to write her too often, so it was fun.

I try and keep my personal feelings for Duncan separate from my characters feelings [g] Does that make sense?

Back when we first started writing these, there were like six of us writing them. M was the one who wrote the first story in the series that introduced Methos, but she never posted it publicly. It has the strawberry jam scene [g]

Thanks for requesting this one! It was fun :)
She went that-a-way...: amused methosjinxed_wood on June 1st, 2007 05:18 pm (UTC)
I'm terrible at giving feedback, amn't I? You'd think that someone who wrote some much would be better!
Ithithildyn on June 1st, 2007 05:21 pm (UTC)
Huh? Where did that come from? [suffers mental whiplash] [g]
She went that-a-way...: amused methosjinxed_wood on June 1st, 2007 05:27 pm (UTC)
*g*

No, it's just that I sometimes wish I had more to say, especially when I really like a story/essay. But those are almost the hardest comments to write, because I find myself just saying things like 'and that part was cool...oh, and I liked that part too...'
Ithithildyn on June 1st, 2007 05:30 pm (UTC)
I will always happily accept an "I liked the story" :) I'm easy (but never cheap) I'm not on of those auhours who seem to be insulted if every comment isn't a dissertation. I'm just grateful to know someone is actually reading!