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22 April 2006 @ 01:17 pm
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I read this short story this morning and the writer has captured the 'voice' of Methos and Amanda perfectly. I'm jealous! :)
 
 
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Unovisunovis on April 22nd, 2006 09:08 pm (UTC)
I don't think you should be jealous.

The dialogue itself isn't bad, but it's lost in all the eye-rolling, grimacing, archness, and other bits of business. That added to the emotional tags punching up almost every line made them seem like drag queens putting on a show. I only made it halfway through.

I think a little direction goes a long way with these two. especially if you want their voices to be heard and their dialogue to shine.
Ith: From Hellithildyn on April 22nd, 2006 09:43 pm (UTC)
It just hit all the right buttons for me first thing this morning :) Made me smile, which is a rare enough thing some days!
She went that-a-way...jinxed_wood on April 22nd, 2006 11:30 pm (UTC)
Ouch!
Laurie of the Isles: Kotondo1_mad_squirrel on April 27th, 2006 01:53 am (UTC)
Ooh! That is yummy!