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08 May 2012 @ 06:47 pm
Rewrite  
Okay, about ten minutes into Avengers, I'd decided I need to rewrite/revise White As Snow, Red As Blood.


When I started it, I tried to make educated guesses from the clips. Some stuff I got right, others, not so much. The story hinges on the tesseract still being on Earth, so for sure the story must be pre-movie. I also need to remove Thor from the story (sorry, Thor!) I believe I've come up with a suitably technobabble way for Loki to interact with Methos, Clint, etc., and it's no more farfetched than a lot of canon stuff. And lastly, I'm tying the end of the story to the beginning of the movie - actually kind of pleased how that's worked out!

So a little - maybe more - revising, then new stuff. And once I'm done, I'm eager to start the next one!
 
 
 
ericadawn16: Curiousericadawn16 on May 9th, 2012 02:09 am (UTC)
There was a sign?

Oh, are we talking about the base? I thought you meant the Space where Loki makes his deal.
Ithithildyn on May 9th, 2012 02:15 am (UTC)
Sorry, trying to be vague there. Yep, I meant the base. Can't recall if it was Dark Matter, or Energy? I know I saw NASA signage inside.
I will call her George: Thor 2strangevisitor7 on May 9th, 2012 02:24 am (UTC)
So sad that Thor will be gone. Maybe someday you will write me a Thor story!
Looking forward to reading the changes and the rest of the story!!
jedimasterstarjedimasterstar on May 9th, 2012 03:08 pm (UTC)
Good luck! I'm trying to do my own pre-movie story. Let's just say that It may be interesting.

I remember the base being a NASA base but that's about it.